Written by Caitlin Cruz
Edited by Issa Napon
Originally, I was going to write about four people who gave
me motivation to be a better writer, a better friend, a more
creative person and a better human.
Then, late last week, I read Lane DeGregory’s story for
Valentine’s Day in the Tampa Bay Times:
On Valentine’s Day, a boy’s rite of passage
is finding the right words.
Her story did all of these things.
And, almost five days later, it’s still sticking with me. I
have found myself thinking about this seemingly
inconsequential story many times in the last few days.
DeGregory’s story is about Austin Erickson, an 11-year-old
boy from Trinity, Fla., who is in love with Sarah K. They’ve
been dating since Sept. 4 and it’s her longest relationship.
The story is about trying to find the right Valentine’s Day
card – something everyone struggles with regardless of the
relationship or age.
“But now that I’m in a relationship it seems
more important,” he says Tuesday afternoon. “I
want to impress Sarah.”
Her imagery is spot-on.
“After school, they hang out at picnic tables, waiting
together for a glorious half-hour, from 2:50 until 3:20 p.m.
‘Good thing we have the last bus!’ They talk about their
teachers, other kids, his swim team, her little sister.
‘Everything, really.’ She brings him peanut butter
crackers.”
Austin and his mother start at Hallmark, looking for cards,
stuffed animals, candy, anything that will be representative
of their six-month relationship. He has $100 ready to spend
because he doesn’t “want something that looks like
it’s been bought on a budget.”
I think this story is one of the motivating pieces I have
read in a while because this is a story of little
consequence – Valentine’s Day fluff – but she still treats
the characters with reverence and love. It’s a sign of a
great writer. (DeGregory won 2009 Pulitzer Prize for feature
writing.)
Stories like this one inspire me, motivate me – persuade me,
even – to be a better storyteller and observer. They inspire
me to be a better journalist. This story reminds me no story
is too small or too inconsequential.
My heart broke (and was put back together) with one
sentence: “They don’t make Valentines about holding
hands.”
It’s these kind of stories that motivate me to keep
trying.
There is nothing about life that is inconsequential.
Caitlin,
That is such a sweet story. After reading your post I had to read the article that inspired you and, after doing so, I can see how that kind of journalism motivates you to be a better journalist. I love your comment: “There is nothing about life that is inconsequential”. Articles like the one you shared are a great reminder of the importance of communicating the seemingly insignificant stories – because sometimes, it is the simplest stories that have the greatest impact.
Caitlin, what a nice article! It’s true that something seemingly inconsequential can make a big impact. After reading your post I went and read the story. It was so great!
Thanks for sharing that story Caitlin,it is a great story and great point!